Wednesday, August 28, 2013

The acid attack


Hers was not the “face that launched
A thousand ships” but certainly could singe
envious hearts of the dusky damsels,
though prettier, eclipsed against her
“Fair and lovely” charm in a country crazed
by the porcelain pale skin and light eyes.
A darling of all neighbourhood aunties
And secretly of uncles as well,
 She walked with a bounce
of youth and smug confidence.
She walked on a rose-petalled path,
discouraging lovelorn offers
With the ice perfected over precocious years,
Happily ignorant of the bitterness
Of unrequited love and the
Smouldering murderous rage
Being carried in a vial every day.

- Neha Bansal










8 comments:

  1. So nicely written...I like the way the horrific part has been left for the reader to imagine...I cant imagine that these acid attacks are taking place in the modern times too...Truly we're living in the times of transition where medieval and modern values and practices(including crimes and punishments) are so easily mixed up to one's convenience...

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  2. but certainly could singe
    envious hearts of the dusky damsels,
    though prettier, eclipsed against her
    “Fair and lovely” charm in a country crazed
    by the porcelain pale skin and light eyes.
    What a wonderful jibe at the country obsessed with fair complexion

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  3. Thank u, so much. Indeed our country is obsessed with fair complexion.

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  4. Neha very beautifully expressed. It’s morally repugnant behaviour and such ignominious acts should be condemned and such people should be shamed publicly and make to suffer like they are living in a hell !

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  5. so true, payal...yes they should be given punishments that would scar them for life...

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  6. Very troublesome this whole acid attack business. It is beautifully written. I am able to read T.S. Eliot repeatedly in your work and this might surprise you on occassion even Larkin. He also has a similar style- simple, spare with a twist hidden in the seeming innocuousness

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  7. i read larkin as a part of upsc syllabus...he may have crept in very unconsciously...love Eliot...so any comparison with him is a big compliment...thx...

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