Under the amaltas tree
The yellow
blossoms
Adorned a
little bride
In an
innocent childhood game
of marrying
the boy next door.
She clasped
his pudgy fingers
amidst
marigold confetti,
simulated
the sacred satapadi
around the
flaming pile
of deep gulmohar
fire.
Now lying by
his side,
Watching the
sky turn red
And lilac
and indigo,
She weaved
her dreams
In floral
patterns
of cherished
hopes and
joyous
future.
Night now
and reluctantly
giving up
her playmate’s company
she walked
back home
chasing the
glow worms
when those
rapine hands
snatched
away her childhood
crushed the
petals
pilfered her
dreams
outraged her
modesty
violated the
flower
of her
being...
- Neha Bansal
- Neha Bansal
Beautiful...the imagery of flowers is simply enchanting. The rude shock at the end..makes one feel violated. Keep writing.
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Deleteall your poems are so wonderful.
ReplyDeleteThank u, so much sir. Your words are really encouraging.
ReplyDeleteVery touching. I am able to spot a pattern to the poems. A twist in the second half. Being predictable in style is slightly problematic
ReplyDeleteyes you are right... i guess i'll have to work on them...thx for ur comments...
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