For her, you burnt the entire world,
A cornucopia of golden dreams,
where the verdure of the paddy fields
reflected in the sunfilled plentiful streams.
The days were full of a myriad flowers,
and the fireflies lit up the darkest skies.
The emerald green of our splendid isle
Was filled with our children's gleeful cries.
Where Apsaras danced in our great halls
and the famous artists vied with each other.
Where Meghnada performed brave feats
While Akshay and little Trishira brought
a thousand smiles to their doting mothers.
And then you brought her to our land,
The wailing wife of a prince-wanderer!
What madness had seized you
to stake our dreams at the altar of your desire?
Ten thousand you had in your harem,
each melting in a hopeless longing.
Each woman, a prize you had won!
The priceless wives and concubines.
Was she really the prettiest of us all?
Or, even the most noble of birth?
What made you burn with such yearning
for a girl, said to be born from earth?
And for her, you sacrificed it all.
The boisterous teenage of our youngest son.
And, banished your only righteous brother
who tried to make some sense.
You didn't hear the cries of new brides
Or saw those slender bangle-less arms.
Neither could you feel the heat of the pyres
Nor, smell the blighted unattended crops
that laid waste in our once glorious farms.
One after the other, the heroes fell
As continued the macabre dance of war.
But, you refused my pleading counsels
even when kumbhkaran's body began to char.
The vanquisher of Indra went down next
But your stubborn pride refused to yield.
As you rejected the divinity of Rama,
And jumped ten-headed into the battlefield.
Was it lust, ego or unbriddled pride
that eclipsed the light of your mind?
What was that kingly hubris
that made you so erringly blind?
And now you lay so still
As your widows line up by the pyre
And the toddler grandson of yours
unsteadily holds the torch of fire.
- Neha Bansal
Marvelously narrated the agony of a sati known as Mandodari, the underdog and under estimated persona among the stalwarts in the greatest epic and timeless classic"Ramayana".
ReplyDeleteOnly a few would dare to write feelings of such characters.
Great effort and nicely written 👍👍
Thanks a ton Sandeep, for finding time to read this one
DeleteHow appropriately described is the wailing of an unlucky wife, a pitiful mother and a miserable woman!
ReplyDeleteThx Shweta for taking out time to read it
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ReplyDeleteIt’s a marvellous take on the arrogant acts of Ravan. Writing it from the perspective of his wife makes it even more special. If it were from anybody from the raghuvanshi side, it would’ve been rather predictable since they were the ‘righteous ones’ and also the enemies so to say, but saying it from the standpoint of someone belonging to Ravan’s own family makes it highly highly unique. And the ideas! It should already be published Di!
So poignantly you’ve put across the plight of a wife and the woes of a prosperous kingdom brought to its knees all due to the pride of one haughty man.
Am so glad to have read it :))
Thank you so much, nitika. Grateful
DeleteIt is an interesting take on the myth. Yet I am fascinated by the counter myth. That Ravan was a man of learning and he knew that his way to salvation lay at the hands of Lord Rama.
ReplyDeleteYour narration is spot on though. I always see traces of Ezekiel and Eliot in your writings as I have said before
Thanks Hriday. I love your comments always ❤️
ReplyDeleteLovely !
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DeleteI loved your perspective on Mandodari, the way you so poignantly penned down your thoughts . I am sure even Mandodari must have been besieged with these maelstrom of emotions.
ReplyDeleteI always feel that not that Sita was the prettiest woman , which led Ravana do the things he did , it was his inflated hubris which wrought havoc and the apocalypse… or perhaps it was fated this way !
Thanks payal.... Perhaps it was fated .. or as Hriday said, that ravan knew his salvation lay in the hands of rama
DeleteAnd there is the story of vedhavati
ReplyDeleteIt is really very nice to read something from a different perspective. We all know Ramayana but it seems so different from her point of view. You penned it down beautifully.
ReplyDeleteMandodari was wife of one of the most powerful and learned man of his time, Yet she was so helpless. He was enjoying ruling his sone ki lanka and everything else with it.
But everything changed once he brought a pious women to his Lanka forcefully. The famous lanka was burnt to ashes. But he never paid heed to the advice of his wife and all the well wishers and lost everything. Beautiful....
Chhavi
It's true men do foolish things and women suffer..and so does the subjects due to the folly of a king
DeleteThe man who was considered so powerful and wise, waged an unwinnable war and many paid the price. I really liked the way you described an underrated character, centuries of marginalization of women at the hands of men, and the inevitable disaster brought by the war.
ReplyDeleteThank u himani for your kind words. I like giving voice to voiceless characters....😊
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