As a child
with the soft cadence
of pitter patter,
my senses slowly
filled with the clean
petrichor of the rain-bathed
happy terracotta tiles
which after months
of baked agony
find a succour in
the cool waters that
so generously fell
from the heavenly azure.
The house smelled of
cardamom, ginger and
cinnamon infused milky tea
that the grownups liked
to sip as they sat idly
Knitting, poring over magazines and
solving cryptic clues of the
Sunday crosswords.
My brother and I
having filled our bellies
with gram flour and
spinach fritters and
having licked off all
traces of ketchup,
raced to float
our little origami boat
that carried our dreams
on the tiny rivulets
that flowed unabashed
unstopped by the dry
prickly grass of our lawns.
Now, I sit impatient
as my car snail-paces
amidst a sea of traffic
on a pot-holed
tar-coal road,
cursing the rains
whose murky waters worsened the already
nerve-racking odyssey
I undertake each day
across my polluted city.
-Neha Bansal
Beautiful !
ReplyDeleteNice comparison of fun filled childhood with today’s stress full life in a city . One can enjoy the rain at ones leisure , rain which sometimes seems divine gives worse feelings at times. Neha ji brings back the sweet memories of childhood when she had a time to enjoy the rain and exemplified the joy with brother by eating special cuisines together and by observing the flow of paper boat . I like mentioning of minute remembrance like “ having licked of all traces of ketchup “, a common memory of many
ReplyDeleteOverall poem is good and nicely depicted the nostalgic feeling
A very lively narrative. Great 👍. Keep it up Ma'am
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and so effortlessly narrated the whole time mam❤️🌻
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