When they paraded her naked,
jeering at her, condemning her to be the "dayan"
her ancient breasts on her wrinkled body
were wounded by the stones pelted.
Her stoic eyes surveyed the scene
refusing to shed a single tear,
rested for a flickering moment on me
and i averted mine in cowardice.
Refusing to acknowledge those years of affection,
she showered on her neighbor's children.
Denying the tangy taste of raw mango candy
that she hid in our pockets magically
and wearing of those hibiscus and frangipani flowers
with which she tidied our unruly hair.
Abnegating those myriad times when her timely interruption
saved us from our mothers' beatings
and also forgetting her "knowing teasing" look as
I eyed, courted and eventually married her only niece.
And I let them burn her at stake
for the sickness of village children
and deaths of three cows and one half-blind dog,
knowing well it to be the pretext
to grab her half an acre land.
- Neha Bansal
- Neha Bansal
Very touchy and heart wrenching...with this image. it become a very creative and thoughtful expression
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ReplyDeleteLove this poem. Clearly your bestest. Love the taste of raw mango candy and the smell of frangipani.
ReplyDeletethank u so much. i too love this the most :)
DeleteExcellent work. I did some work with tribals in ahom. I came across many such stories. Your empathy for fellow human beings and their pain is praiseworthy.
ReplyDeleteThank you, so much. Sir, i am grateful for ur kind words...warm regards
ReplyDeleteRamanujan all over. But much more touching and evocative. Loved this
ReplyDeletethanks... yes the last few lines are paricularly inspired by him.. :)
ReplyDeleteWhere did you come across the subject Neha? This issue had been hanging fire since 1983 when the Late Sitaram Kesari was Welfare Minister. Dayan Pratha. It was finally dropped in 2003,unanswered. It still burns tribal and remote rural areas.
ReplyDeleteExtremely touching.
Sir, i read a story of mahashweta devi. Ever since it has been haunting me.
ReplyDeletevery touchy
ReplyDeleteSure maam it's a great presentation of the pain of the witness, witness of the cruelty and the loving act she performed in past to many. U placed the contradiction well, tragedy touched the peak somewhere,
ReplyDeleteBut I feel it's one sided, as u hv created such emotional scene the the so called DAYAN automatically turns into victim, innocent, loving, ,, just being a simple PREY of superstition and social stigmas,
There may be a clarity of the DAYAN concept from spirituality as well as locality and practicality.
I felt in ur poem, the witness is like Imran Hashmi fathe in movie EK THI DAYAN, and myself having the feeling of imran Hashmi
Portrayed perfectly maam
Great WORDS used, defying shashi tharoor dictionary
Regards
Hahaha...thx padmakar... will try to correct it if i can...
ReplyDeletePerfect blend of sorrow and joy. The guilt of the witness somehow accentuates the horror of the event.
ReplyDeleteThx a ton himani 😊
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