Saturday, January 11, 2020

An outing with girlfriends


An outing with friends

On a cold wintry night
sipping the Starbucks latte
we drove around the city,
discussing the leitmotifs
in a Director’s cut
we had watched that evening
on reclining seats with ottomans
and warm blankets to cover our feet.
In Jimmy Choo heels
clutching Louis Vuitton bags,
we planned for fancier cars
and holidays in Provencal France.
Bitched about indolent maids
and the meddlesome in-laws.
Ranted about the wearisome life in general
And the overbearing bosses in particular.
Made fuss over the Sabyasachi ensembles,
For the friend’s destination wedding next year.
We cursed the government that
wasted tax payers’ money copiously
and the uncouth people at large
for spitting and pissing all over the city.
The harangue went on and on about
the myriad discomforts of our lives
till the time we saw her,
the one with the vacant eyes.
She stood on the side walk,
her clothes tattered and torn
her hair a lifeless brown and shorn
her youthful body contrasting
with the ancient stoic face.
Silent now in the snail-paced traffic,
we soberly passed by her
and saw her survey the footpath
to rest her weary bones
under the cold street light.

-Neha Bansal





20 comments:

  1. Awesomely amazing. Very true assessment of the present day scenario.

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  2. Stark realities of life

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  3. Beautiful lines Neha...The poet in u always entralls me.

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  4. I love your use of 'we' instead of the commonly used 'they'... It's kinda a call for initiating ourselves into introspection... Do write more and make it more visible;it's too subtly beautiful and humane

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  5. Tugs at my heartstrings. I know the context and the source, so I can relate to it even more.

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  6. It is so beautiful. The contrast is striking. On one side there are people who have everything in the world but they don't appreciate them and sometimes even criticise them. While on other hand there are not so fortunate ones who can't even imagine to have those things which we throw carelessly. There is so much desparity in the world. You painted an amazing picture with your beautiful words. Awesome...
    Chhavi Gupta

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  7. drhemawathi1969@gmail.comJanuary 21, 2020 at 8:44 PM

    Such a beautiful piece.
    How clearly you describe our vague issues and economic scenario.
    Absolutely stunned.
    As if every word comes to describe the whole picture.
    Vivid description.
    With warm regards..DrHemawathi.

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    1. Thank u Dr hema. It means a lot to me..despite the condition of net in islands...u took out time to read and comment. Thx a ton

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  8. Indubitably brilliant ! You have a knack of touching readers heart .We should be content with low level ecstasy which life offers us , and something we could all do and with more of it in our lives ..there are grotesque absurdities and disparities between the rich and the poor and you penned it down so poignantly..
    Remarkable ❤️❤️

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  9. Awesome Mam, true depiction, lot of learning for current generation in these meaningful lines...

    Regards
    Harish Sahni

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