Crochet Lace
Hankies
Surfing internet for hours and hours
to kill my nocturnal ennui
I stumbled upon those long forgotten
Crochet laced hankies .
Sewn with dainty silken laces,
like the ones my mother made
in lilac, aquamarine and tangerine shades.
She decorated my kerchiefs
With dulcet patterns looped with care
and fixed them to my check pinafore
as she dropped me at the day care.
And she also made hordes of them
to pack them in my trousseau trunk.
As nostalgia washed me over again,
I ordered a dozen online
For my mother with her dwindling eyesight.
- Neha Bansal
Beautiful �� last line is perfect to end the poem even when you don’t prefer to end your poems clearly
ReplyDeleteThank u, namrata πππ
DeleteAgain a beautiful one.. I nvr tried crochet.. but hv seen mummy n dadi doin... I do end up buying these online...
ReplyDeleteMysteriously.. how time...interest r changing.
Thank u, ma'am. I really wish i could crochet...just can't...
DeleteHeart touching...superb πππππ
ReplyDeleteThank u, ganga π
DeleteNeha your poetry is wonderful and the descriptions are sublime ! Each time I read it , it strikes an emotional chord in my heart , thinking about my grandmothers and mother . And also bhuas massis who we barely meet now as we all are busy bees ! You are an adept writer ❤️
ReplyDeleteYour poems connects to the powerful insight which atleast i really didn’t know existed !
Thank u, dear payal. Thank u for ur generous comments always...they keep me going π
DeleteSuperb....nostalgic!
ReplyDeleteThank u, zubair π
DeleteSuperb Neha,
ReplyDeleteThank u so much π
DeleteSuperb Neha,
ReplyDeleteNo one captures human emotions the way you do. Summing up motherly love in 15 lines of pure poetry is an art. And incorporating nostalgia, appreciation, care and attention to detail in those same lines literally makes it unforgettable... Congratulations... This one is simply beautiful...
ReplyDeleteThank u so much, samhita..for ur ever encouraging words ☺
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ReplyDeleteI crochet myself, but now have shifted from hankies to doing so on edges of stoles , lovely poem. Use a few crochet kerchiefs too ππ
ReplyDeleteI loved the crocheted hankies....they were so feminine and enchanting...
DeleteBeautiful poem. A reminder of how caring and talented are mothers are. A fact which is so easily forgotten. Love the nuances!
ReplyDeleteThank u minnie....u know ur reading my poem means a lot to me...always has... And yes our mums are special...i remember ur mom's beautiful cross stitch worksπ
DeleteBeautiful pen picture...of times gone by, things gone by. A real testimony to a mother's live that lived on in the patterns of the hankies..love the way you map the gap of time with varying degree of her vision at both end!
ReplyDeleteBtw...wondering if I can locate the online thing as an agent somewhere:)
Keep going!
Thank u sumati π
ReplyDeleteThe way crochet lace hankies are sewn you sew the words beautifully.
ReplyDeleteEvery woman has this memory of grandmothers mothers doing it.
All your poems touch deeply..strings of the heart...emotional.
Love you and your poems.
Regards
Thank u so much, Dr Hema πππ
DeleteHow so delightfully sensitive too! Congratulations Neha Bansal Mam for one more feather..
ReplyDeleteThank u so much, Dr. Prakash π
ReplyDeleteSimply beautiful....... I remember mom making them. It seemed so easy when she used to make it and when i tried i just could not. We use to flaunt them in school and college saying my mom made it. Love you mummy. Love you too neha for writing this poem. Beautiful.......
ReplyDeleteWhat beautiful memories π
DeleteVery sweet...beautifully written
ReplyDeleteThank u so much ππ
DeleteGreat poem ma'am. Your command on poetry is commendable.
ReplyDeletethank u so much. regards
DeleteBeautiful acknowledgement to loving mom
ReplyDelete..james..
thank u, james :)
DeleteSo lovely yet so poignant.Every time I read your poetry I marvel at the flow of words.Keep writing.
ReplyDeletethank u pati dev...will keep writing n keep bugging u to read them n write comments :)
DeleteCan feel the poise .. ultimate
ReplyDeleteThanks, Megha :-)
ReplyDeleteFabulous poem ma'am...keep motivating
ReplyDeleteThank u :-)
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