In the narrow lanes
that branched out
like capillaries from
the main aorta of
the once opulently
resplendent Chandni Chowk,
before the wafts from
the succulent jalebi,
and of the sonth poured
magnanimously in the
leafy cups full of yoghurt
based creamy and minty chaat
could reach our young nostrils,
we were whisked away
quickly by our genie mother
as if on a magic carpet
as we saw bazaars full of
trimmings and tinsels,
the silver ornaments,
glass chandeliers,
vats of attars and heaps of
ground and whole spices,
so tantalisingly close
and yet so unreachable
due to the expert dexterity
of our mother and her kin
who only stopped at
the entrance of this
tottering Haveli which had
certainly been imposing once.
But, now swarming with
people of all hues and
dialects occupying its
multiple rooms that
were spread around a
multi-storied chowk and
were interconnected in
ways totally alien to the
privacy loving and
“Me-time” demanding
current generation.
II
After many rounds of greetings
and touching of elders feet
to their gentle chiding
that girls don’t touch the
parents feet,
And, after many rounds of
home made kadi chawal
and a sneaky snack
of Top Ramen and orange
flavoured Rasna,
hours of school gossips
and boasting of our
excellent academic grades,
as the heat subsided,
we headed to our Sanjhi terrace
to witness the most interesting
soap opera romance conjuring
right in front of our eyes,
as the dusky and fair didis
who came out to dry
chana papad and moong
mangodis on tarpaulins
received lovesick looks
from the kite-flying tall,
handsome but gawky
bhaiyas ,
causing flutters of butterfly
in our tender stomachs,
giving us vicarious pleasures
much to the chagrin
of our all knowing mothers
giving us those stinky eyes
and ordering us to run
their sundry errands.
III
As the sun dipped behind
the old minarets and new
haphazard encroachments,
thousands of pigeons, parrots
and even tiny sparrows filled
the sky in kinetic patterns
forever changing and yet
so heart warmingly assuring
as we cleaned our part
of the terrace and cooled
the baked floor with
mugs full of water,
our senses heady with
the thirst-quenching aroma
of the water drenched bricks,
as we spread cotton filled
mattresses, bolster pillows
and newly washed top sheets
and stationed surahis
along with different
shaped steel tumblers.
And after evening Aarti
and watching 6 songs of Chitrahar
along with ever increasing
number of advertising films,
and a rare treat of vanilla
cup brought by our Mamaji,
and hours of spooky
stories that were fabricated
almost extemporaneously
until warned by elders
of dire consequences like
cancelling of our favourite
nagori puri and halva
for the following day,
we gave much needed
respite to their ears
and traced the constellations
with our little fingers,
outlining the Orion
and the Ursa Major
in a midnight blue sky
till the dreams invaded our eyes.
That’s so lovely! Keep writing ✍️
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ReplyDeleteNostalgic melody. dear Neha
ReplyDeleteI am missing those days. It is very nostalgic... Awesome.!!
ReplyDeleteNeha, how beautifully you took me down the memory lane!
ReplyDeleteSo beautiful Neha didi!
ReplyDeleteThe entire day went by like chitrahaar in the eyes. Very live composition. Leafy cups, girls don't touch feet, kadhi chawal, boasting about grades, romance of didi bhaiya on the sly, thirst quenching aroma from the water drenched bricks , cancelling of nagori halwa threat..... Have been there , seen it, felt it, but could never compose. Will share it with son. You have a way with words. It's an av composition 💕🌹🥰
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ReplyDeleteWonderful Neha! Takes me down my childhood-adolescence lane… lovely rummaging…
ReplyDeleteWriter vividly recalls her childhood, the narrow streets leading to Nani's house, bustling with the aroma of street food and the vibrant colors of various commodities on display in the heart of Chandni Chowk. Visits were a sensory delight, as she savored the local delicacies and explored the diverse market.
ReplyDeleteThe poem resonates with readers in a unique way.
The charm extended beyond the crowded lanes, with socially interwoven relatives creating a warm atmosphere. Daytime was filled with playful activities by children, their laughter echoing through the air.The terrace came alive with the subtle romanctic charm of young girls engaging in daily routines and tasks and boys flying kites.
As night approached, the rooftop transformed into a makeshift bedroom. The preparation for sleep involved a ritual of storytelling, weaving tales that transported us to magical realms. Under the blanket of stars, we lay, captivated by the stories and the celestial display above, creating timeless memories .
Poet skillfully evokes nostalgia through her keen observations of the mundane .. Well done ..
Feeling Nostalgic... Very Well Written 👍👍
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