The sweetest sound those days
was that of the gong
that put an end to the
last stretched hours
at the school when the
teachers droned on
and the keen types
finished their homework
and we dreamt with
the eyes wide open
of the mouth watering
treats that were displayed
on cycle carriers, carts
and even thelas.
Treats that were prepared
with not so clean hands and
ingredients absolutely doubtful,
but the lure of the tamarind
and rock salt churan and
the mango pulp candies
brought out smiles that
were perfect with
imperfect set of
half milk-half permanent teeth.
The fried papads,
salted phalsa berries and
boiled corn cobs enticed
the kids enough to not
drop their precious rupee
coins in the piggy banks
but splurge them all here.
And, as we tried to fit
those mashed potatoes and
lemony mint water filled
patase in our little mouths,
it was the unsophisticated
shaved ice golas infused with
sherbets in myriad colours
and flavours that melted the
hearts of even our mathematics
and PT teachers who
were seen giggling
as they relished the wickedly
tangy Kala Khatta sorbets.
- Neha Bansal
What a sweet nostalgia!!
ReplyDeleteThe best days of life
ReplyDeleteOh I went down the memory lane..... With this poem. Beautiful. Nostalgic
ReplyDeleteWonderful
ReplyDeleteI went down the memory lane... Sometimes I feel the kids nowadays don't even enjoy half of the simple things we used to. We had less money but more fun and happiness 😊
ReplyDeleteIn this nostalgic prose, author vividly recount the post-school deeds to corner carts, where not so hygienic candies, tangy churan, and crispy papad awaited eager hands. With piggy bank savings jingling, children(even teachers) indulged in this after-school ritual, relishing the forbidden delights that left a sweet-sour imprint on their carefree days.
ReplyDeleteThe poem has evoked emotions that linger long after the last line... good work.
These lines leads to readers to his childhood where there childhood used to enjoy the taste of narrated eatables without the care of hygiene and these lines provoke to do once more.
ReplyDeleteThis takes me back in those stress free carefree days …. Nostalgia 🙌❤️
ReplyDeleteBeautifully Crafted.. Very Well Written..
ReplyDeleteThe choice of words are excellent... 👍👍👍👍