Sunday, January 21, 2024

The treats outside our school




The sweetest sound those days

was that of the gong 

that put an end to the

last stretched hours 

at the school when the 

teachers droned on 

and the keen types 

finished their homework 

and we dreamt with 

the eyes wide open 

of the mouth watering 

treats that were displayed 

on cycle carriers, carts 

and even thelas. 

Treats that were prepared

with not so clean hands and 

ingredients absolutely doubtful, 

but the lure of the tamarind 

and rock salt churan and 

the mango pulp candies

brought out smiles that 

were perfect with 

imperfect set of 

half milk-half permanent teeth. 

The fried papads, 

salted phalsa berries and 

boiled corn cobs enticed

the kids enough to not 

drop their precious rupee 

coins in the piggy banks 

but splurge them all here.

And, as we tried to fit 

those mashed potatoes and 

lemony mint water filled 

 patase in our little mouths, 

it was the unsophisticated 

shaved ice golas infused with 

sherbets in myriad colours 

and flavours that melted the 

hearts of even our mathematics 

and PT teachers who 

were seen giggling 

as they relished the wickedly 

tangy Kala Khatta sorbets. 


- Neha Bansal 

9 comments:

  1. What a sweet nostalgia!!

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  2. The best days of life

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  3. Oh I went down the memory lane..... With this poem. Beautiful. Nostalgic

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  4. Ravindra singh sheoran SheoranJanuary 21, 2024 at 2:39 PM

    Wonderful

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  5. I went down the memory lane... Sometimes I feel the kids nowadays don't even enjoy half of the simple things we used to. We had less money but more fun and happiness 😊

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  6. In this nostalgic prose, author vividly recount the post-school deeds to corner carts, where not so hygienic candies, tangy churan, and crispy papad awaited eager hands. With piggy bank savings jingling, children(even teachers) indulged in this after-school ritual, relishing the forbidden delights that left a sweet-sour imprint on their carefree days.
    The poem has evoked emotions that linger long after the last line... good work.

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  7. These lines leads to readers to his childhood where there childhood used to enjoy the taste of narrated eatables without the care of hygiene and these lines provoke to do once more.

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  8. This takes me back in those stress free carefree days …. Nostalgia 🙌❤️

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  9. Beautifully Crafted.. Very Well Written..
    The choice of words are excellent... 👍👍👍👍

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