Urmila
While feminists
sing Sita’s blues
Decrying Rama’s spineless back,
The traditionalists
try to justify
Keeping Rama in his times and context.
The little
sister of Janaki
is never
talked about.
The languishing
wife of Laxmana
who for
fourteen years was left behind.
Honouring
his fraternal ties,
when he
followed Rama,
the world
extolled his supreme devotion
and
relinquishing the princely charms.
But no one
cares for his lonely wife
who embraced
sleep at his command.
For fourteen
years, Urmila slept
And dreamt dutifully
his share of dreams
While he
stood wide awake
To guard
outside Rama’s hermitage.
Her tender
dreams of honeyed love
Turned sour
by his departure
Even the
sweet embrace of sleep
Couldn’t
provide any succour.
The long unloved
fourteen years
brought fine
wrinkles and grey hair.
Urmila sleeps on her palatial bed,
her nuptial
dreams sacrificed at duty’s altar.
- Neha Bansal
Flaming June (1895) by Lord Leighton |
Proud to see you voice for those voiceless! Beautiful poem!
ReplyDeletethank u so much, Zubair :) i m grateful for your comments
DeleteYou have given a voice to those ignored by their times and history. This poem adds another dimension to the understanding of the great epic of Ramayana.
ReplyDeletethank u, deepak for reading my poems always :)
DeleteUrmila was never portrayed like the way you did ma'am..lovely composition.
ReplyDeletethank you so much, Harshika. i am glad you like it :)
DeleteVery beautifully depicted.I really love reading all your poems๐.
ReplyDeletethank u so much :) pls keep reading...makes me super duper happy
DeleteFresh concept and compassionate portrayal makes it unique. Congratulations on writing yet another thought provoking piece of poetry.
ReplyDeleteThank u so much, namrata ๐ ur words mean a lot to me
DeleteYour poem rightly brings alive the pain and loneliness of forgotten Urmila. Sensitivity is touching.
ReplyDeleteThank u, my dear. Your words mean a lot to me.
DeleteWonderful! Expressing of Urmila’s sacrifice,long forgotten and never given due place in most of Ramayanas ,in lyrics made me wonder how sad her character in ramayana should have been depicted!
ReplyDeleteThank u so much, uncle. It's true many characters were so marginalised that we could never know their angst...
DeleteYou write so well and each word fits so aptly . Urmila , the forgottten character of Ramayana , who sacrificed her youth because her husband demanded her to . The pain and loneliness she experienced are unfathomable and her love for husband and the sacrifices she made cannot be curtailed .
ReplyDeleteNeha keep up the good work ❤️
Thank u my dear friend. Our grand narratived often skip the tales of the sad stories of the subalterns
DeleteUntold stories of pain and longing,the heart that aches for love,for the embrace of affection.. nothing that brings solace to the emptiness and loneliness!
ReplyDeleteYes trye, indeed...thanks gor reading ๐
DeleteTrue*
DeleteIt's really a very touching poem only a woman can handle all the situation like Urmilla sensitivity is touching dear keep it up
ReplyDeleteThank u so much. I am grateful for ur kind words.
DeleteHmmm... Poignant portrayal
ReplyDeleteThank u ๐
DeleteA unique narration - Congratulations for bringing alive lost sentiments Neha Bansal Ma'am!
ReplyDeleteThank u, Dr prakash ๐
ReplyDeleteso beautifully portrayed the unparalleled sacrifice of Urmila, the forgotten heroin of Ramayana...unique level of description...superb madam !
ReplyDeleteThank u so much. ๐
DeleteBeautiful poem. I am veey proud of you,neha beta. Keep writing.
ReplyDeleteThank u sir. Regards. I am grateful for your kind comments.
ReplyDeleteUrmila had been a favourite topic for Hindi poems, especially poets belonging to and influenced by the period of Hindi poetry known as "Dwivedi Yug". To mention a few Maithili Sharan Gupt's 'Urmila' is a masterclass. There is one 'mahakavya' written on Urmila by Balkrishna Sharma 'Naveen'. What is heartening to see is the depth of your understanding on this highly complex topic and beautiful understanding and depiction of the emotions of Urmila. Thanks for writing this and I hope to see many more in future.
ReplyDeleteThank u so much for ur kind words...would be reading Maithli sharan Gupt's "urmila"
DeleteVery touching. Never thought of it this way. This one was quite good
ReplyDeletethx a ton, hriday :)
DeleteThis is beautiful
ReplyDeleteWould definitely read about voiceless Urmila
Thank u bro. M happy that u liked this. May like to reaf on ahalya, hidimbi, yashoda :-)
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