Sunday, February 17, 2019

Urmila


Urmila



While feminists sing Sita’s blues
Decrying Rama’s spineless back,
The traditionalists try to justify
Keeping Rama in his times and context.
The little sister of Janaki
is never talked about.
The languishing wife of Laxmana
who for fourteen years was left behind.
Honouring his fraternal ties,
when he followed Rama,
the world extolled his supreme devotion
and relinquishing the princely charms.
But no one cares for his lonely wife
who embraced sleep at his command.
For fourteen years, Urmila slept
And dreamt dutifully his share of dreams
While he stood wide awake
To guard outside Rama’s hermitage.
Her tender dreams of honeyed love
Turned sour by his departure
Even the sweet embrace of sleep
Couldn’t provide any succour.
The long unloved fourteen years
brought fine wrinkles and grey hair.
Urmila sleeps on her palatial bed,
her nuptial dreams sacrificed at duty’s altar.
                                                    - Neha Bansal

Flaming June (1895) by Lord Leighton





35 comments:

  1. Proud to see you voice for those voiceless! Beautiful poem!

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    1. thank u so much, Zubair :) i m grateful for your comments

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  2. You have given a voice to those ignored by their times and history. This poem adds another dimension to the understanding of the great epic of Ramayana.

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  3. Urmila was never portrayed like the way you did ma'am..lovely composition.

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    1. thank you so much, Harshika. i am glad you like it :)

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  4. Very beautifully depicted.I really love reading all your poems๐Ÿ˜ƒ.

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    1. thank u so much :) pls keep reading...makes me super duper happy

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  5. Fresh concept and compassionate portrayal makes it unique. Congratulations on writing yet another thought provoking piece of poetry.

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    1. Thank u so much, namrata ๐Ÿ˜Š ur words mean a lot to me

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  6. Your poem rightly brings alive the pain and loneliness of forgotten Urmila. Sensitivity is touching.

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  7. Wonderful! Expressing of Urmila’s sacrifice,long forgotten and never given due place in most of Ramayanas ,in lyrics made me wonder how sad her character in ramayana should have been depicted!

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    1. Thank u so much, uncle. It's true many characters were so marginalised that we could never know their angst...

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  8. You write so well and each word fits so aptly . Urmila , the forgottten character of Ramayana , who sacrificed her youth because her husband demanded her to . The pain and loneliness she experienced are unfathomable and her love for husband and the sacrifices she made cannot be curtailed .
    Neha keep up the good work ❤️

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    1. Thank u my dear friend. Our grand narratived often skip the tales of the sad stories of the subalterns

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  9. Untold stories of pain and longing,the heart that aches for love,for the embrace of affection.. nothing that brings solace to the emptiness and loneliness!

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  10. It's really a very touching poem only a woman can handle all the situation like Urmilla sensitivity is touching dear keep it up

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    1. Thank u so much. I am grateful for ur kind words.

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  11. Hmmm... Poignant portrayal

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  12. A unique narration - Congratulations for bringing alive lost sentiments Neha Bansal Ma'am!

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  13. so beautifully portrayed the unparalleled sacrifice of Urmila, the forgotten heroin of Ramayana...unique level of description...superb madam !

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  14. Beautiful poem. I am veey proud of you,neha beta. Keep writing.

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  15. Thank u sir. Regards. I am grateful for your kind comments.

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  16. Urmila had been a favourite topic for Hindi poems, especially poets belonging to and influenced by the period of Hindi poetry known as "Dwivedi Yug". To mention a few Maithili Sharan Gupt's 'Urmila' is a masterclass. There is one 'mahakavya' written on Urmila by Balkrishna Sharma 'Naveen'. What is heartening to see is the depth of your understanding on this highly complex topic and beautiful understanding and depiction of the emotions of Urmila. Thanks for writing this and I hope to see many more in future.

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    1. Thank u so much for ur kind words...would be reading Maithli sharan Gupt's "urmila"

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  17. Very touching. Never thought of it this way. This one was quite good

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  18. This is beautiful
    Would definitely read about voiceless Urmila

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  19. Thank u bro. M happy that u liked this. May like to reaf on ahalya, hidimbi, yashoda :-)

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